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mis-understood

by Chris Austin
(Colby, Wisconsin)




Beautiful blue eyes, long black wavy hair about shoulder length, and a pristine smile. on the outside she seems to be every guys dream girl but she is a social out-cast and is judged by everyone. she has no one to truly love her for who she really is and someone she is not. one day she is walking down the halls of the crowded high school and is tripped, laughed at, and is called a worthless nobody. she gets up and goes to her locker to find her boyfreind makin-out with who she thought was her best friend..... she gets home takes off her black and purple hoody and stands in front of the bathroom mirror with a black tank top with lace on the straps and black skinny jeans with skulls on the back and looks at herself in the mirror and a tear rolls down her cheek and she slowly picks up the razor blade and starts to drive it into her wrists and the blood gushes out and she falls to her knees crying and falls bad and in her own blood she writes im sorry and slowly fades into the shadows and stops breathing.....




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Sep 16, 2011
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Wow.. <3
by: Destiny

When I first read this, it got a cold chill. I think its just because of the description. Hair: Long black hair-to shoulders, beautiful blue eyes.. That already disrcibes me. The hood and skinnys.. The boyfriend.. best friend.. The tripping. Everyday that one happens though.. The cutting.. I continue to breath, yes.. but im unsure on how much longer that one will be going on.. People would think for me that 4 trips to the hospital would have helpped but.. it doesnt.. <3 i loved this one so much and I had a huge connection with it.

May 25, 2011
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im impressed
by: Anonymous

great work keep it up

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