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because of you

by Diedra Caballero
(Vacaville Califorina)




You made me feel worthless
you made me feel i have no purpose
you cut off my breathing with the things you said
i lay crying in my bed
i have no feeling my body is numb
you think I'm stupid said i was dumb
every thing you say is true
so with blood shot eyes and bloody arms i die because of you




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Mar 05, 2011
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Love it !
by: Fallen Star

You made me feel as if i were worthless
you made me feel like my life was without purpose
you cut my life short with ignorant things you said
here i lay crying tears of blood in my bed
i have no emotion cept pain my body has turned numb
You of all people shouldnt be calling me dumb
After a while my heart tells me that every thing you say is true
so with blood shot eyes and bloody arms i'm emotionally dead
All because of you...
I sorta revised this;Sorry i just thought urs was missing something (&& btw LOVE ur poem)

Oct 12, 2010
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hmm?
by: Deanna

well, i really like this. expecially considering i write dark poetry myself, but i really hope that thats all this is..... a dark poem. it'd be a shame to see someone with such talent die because of someone else! nice work though. well done. very interesting!

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